雅思口语Describe a teacher you had when you were a child and who you liked.

When I was a child, I like most is my Chinese teacher, she seems to be about thirty years old, with black hair and big eyes, her beauty to our very kindly, every day I can see her, because she is a Chinese teacher. Her class is very funny, she is gentle story, I feel she is like my mother. So I like her very much.
until now, I still can remember her gentle voice.
Once, I do not play for Chinese homework, she didn't like the other teachers, but to my gentle smile, let me go to office after school. After school, I fear to office, and saw her, I think she is going to scold me, let me do not result is completed. How do I, how teachers etc, then, she took me by the hand, send me home. I will never forget
palm, teacher, warm temperature of my entire childhood.
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